Unveiling Potential Amidst Lyrical Challenges
Sajida A. Zubair
PR – NST CoralWave Productions
Listening to the track ‘Rab Ho Jaye Razi’ by Khalid Niyazi & Khan Bros, composed by Khalid Niyazi with lyrics written by Salahuddin Ahmad, it becomes apparent that while the lyrics possess glimpses of potential, they ultimately fall short of achieving a cohesive and impactful narrative.
The track which is a production of The Nasheed Studios is recorded by Alpha Tune, alongside the direction of Salahuddin Ahmad, with support from S J Siddiqui as the act, Salman Hussain as the DOP, Abdur Rehman as the editor, Abdur Rahman for CG-VFX and DI coloring, Tanisha Dutta, and Khalid Niyazi as assistant directors, all contribute to the track’s overall presentation.
There’s a discernible lack of consistency in both the imagery and the underlying message, creating a disjointed experience for the listener. This inconsistency poses a significant challenge for audiences attempting to fully immerse themselves in the song’s thematic landscape and emotionally connect with its essence.
However, amidst these shortcomings, there are fleeting moments of brilliance where the lyricist showcases flashes of vivid imagery and raw emotion. These instances offer glimpses into the lyricist’s ability to evoke powerful sentiments and paint vivid scenes with words. Yet, these moments of promise are often overshadowed by lines that feel clichéd or overly familiar, lacking the originality and depth necessary to leave a lasting impression on the listener.
Despite the inherent flaws, there remains ample opportunity for growth and improvement. Encouraging the lyricist to explore different angles and delve deeper into their emotions is paramount. By pushing boundaries and experimenting with more inventive language and metaphors, they can unearth untapped reservoirs of creativity and unlock the full potential of their lyrical prowess. With dedication and refinement, there’s a genuine opportunity for the lyricist to transcend mediocrity and craft lyrics that resonate with audiences on a more profound level.
Constructive feedback catalyzes artistic growth, providing invaluable insights that can help elevate the craft to new heights. The lyricist needs to embrace this feedback as an opportunity for self-improvement rather than a critique of their abilities. By remaining open to constructive criticism and continuously striving for excellence, the lyricist can embark on a journey of artistic evolution, ultimately realizing their full potential as a songwriter. As a listener and admirer of their work, I eagerly anticipate witnessing their growth and evolution in future endeavors.
